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Inge Snip's avatar

ohhh this gave me chills! such a simple setup but it spirals so fast. love the way you build tension through small details. feels like a scene that would live rent-free in someone’s head for weeks!

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Ash's avatar

Thank you so much. It can be hard when you are doing a 5 minute prompt, to be able to build a world and deliver a whole short story, but sometimes it works and I felt like it did here!

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